Your journal entry is well written. It really gives the reader a sense of what is happening through Piggy's point of view. It is clear what is happening and at what point this journal entry is written. You have incorporated a lot of the scenarios mentioned in the novel, which makes this entry seem more credible. I do think you could give a little more detail on Piggy's thoughts that could foreshadow what is happening in the next few chapters. This would be a good way to express your own ideas on what caused the events to happen the way they did. It would also help the reader connect with what he is feeling.
Your choice to write a journal entry on Piggy is understandable. You give reasons that "...he is the one that handles things with brains..." so you could give more examples that would explain how he has contributed in such ways. The response was good, but you could expand a bit more on how this character is vital to the development of the story. Overall it you did a great job, and I enjoyed reading your journal entry and response.
http://lordofleflies.blogspot.ca/2013/04/journal-entry-3-piggy.html
Thanks, your feedback is much appreciated!
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